
This is a work in progress, so it still has to go through revision, many things need to be tweaked and there will probably be a lot of grammar corrections throughout. So pardon any spelling or grammar mistakes or if it doesn't seem to have enough detail if you like lots of detail. Also keep in mind that there might not be a few things that match up. This is because I made changes later on and have yet to make the changes previously. For example, the back stories of some characters may be one

This is just one version of this story that I've started. I am slowly working on this piece and am thinking about putting a price on this book when I'm finished. However, in order to finish this, I would like some feedback concerning whether or not you like what I have so far, what might need to be changed, and whether or not you be willing to pay in order to read the finished copy of the book. For now though this is just the demo version of the story. A secret meeting. A secret mission. Lies a

This is a work in progress, so it still has to go through revision, many things need to be tweaked and there will probably be a lot of grammar corrections throughout. So pardon any spelling or grammar mistakes or if it doesn't seem to have enough detail if you like lots of detail. Also keep in mind that there might not be a few things that match up. This is because I made changes later on and have yet to make the changes previously. For example, the back stories of some characters may be one

This is just one version of this story that I've started. I am slowly working on this piece and am thinking about putting a price on this book when I'm finished. However, in order to finish this, I would like some feedback concerning whether or not you like what I have so far, what might need to be changed, and whether or not you be willing to pay in order to read the finished copy of the book. For now though this is just the demo version of the story. A secret meeting. A secret mission. Lies a