X-MAN SCREENPLAY, BRIAN R. LUNDIN [top 5 books to read TXT] 📗

this lover-boy fits all the profiles from the FBI; this is what I want you to do. I want you to join the club and try to get lover boy’s attention. Be cordial at first and when he really starts to come on to you, brush him off, if the profilers are right this should really piss him off and let see what happens, Christy this could be dangerous, so if you have any qualms about it let us know, no hard feelings.


CHRISTY
I worked as an uncover prostitute on the Westside, got stabbed once by a pissed-off john and a black eye from a over-heated trucker, lover boy will be a piece of cake, when do you want me to start?
RINGO
As soon as possible.
CHRISTY
Got to go, got some shopping to do.

EVETA
Make sure you get receipts for everything you spend so the department can reimburse you! I like that girl, she’s got balls.

An hour later Detective First Grade Christine Guerra entered the office, her long black hair was down to her backside and she wore a skin-tight white Lycra body suit that accentuated her brownish skin and firm body. The suit was low-cut and provided an enticing view of her small breast.
RINGO
Wow! What happened to conservative dressing Detective First Grade Christine Guerra?
CHRISTY
Smiled and slowly turned around.
Think this will get lover boy’s attention?

RINGO
It surely would get mine, have a seat.

INT. MELONY FITNESS CENTER- 6 JUNE 2008-MORNING
Detective First Grade Christine Guerra arrived at the Melony Fitness Center at and registered as Maria Cardosa, she was taken on a tour of the facilities by Juanita Ferrara a personal trainer. There were twenty people working out in the aerobatic class, another fifteen were doing water aerobics and maybe thirty people were sweating, fast walking and running on the elliptical machines, Christy paid the $50.00 fee and joined. The next day Christy went to the fitness center but there was no sign of Esau. On 8 June 208 Christy had just competed ten laps in the pool and was getting out when she noticed a little man looking at her smiling, Christy wore a green thong bikini and her shoulder length black hair was in a ponytail. As she approached the towel rack, the man handed her one, she shyly wrapped the towel around her.
CHRISTY
Thanks!
ESAU
You’re welcome, beautiful lady my name is Davo.

CHRISTY

Maria!
ESAU
Can I buy you a sport drink?

CHRISTY
Sure.
They sat at the counter and Cristy ordered a banana, apple and peach drink and Esau ordered the same.
ESAU
How long have you been a member of the club?

CHRISTY
Just a couple of days, you?

ESAU
Just over a year, I’m surprised that I haven’t seen anyone as beautiful as you here before, what time do you generally come?

CHRISTY
No specific times, sometimes in the morning, sometimes in the evenings.

ESAU
(flashing a big smile)
I guess I will have to stay around here all day in that case just to see you.
Christy finished half of her juice and got up.
CHRISTY
Thanks for the juice.

Esau watched her as she walked away and Christy let her towel slip revealing the smooth curves of her butt, Esua felt the rising in his tight gym shorts. The following morning Christy met with Ringo and Evetta.

INT. RINGO’S OFFICE-9 JUNE 2008-MORNING

CHRISTY
Made contact with Esau yesterday.

EVETTA
Good, how did it go?

CHRISTY
He’s a flirt that’s for sure, but not a bad looking little fuck.
INT. FITNESS CENTER
Later that morning Christy returned to the Center and after swimming in the pool she looked in the weight room and saw Esau pressing a two hundred pound weight, when he saw Cristy he motioned for the handler to place the weights in the rack.

ESAU
Whatsup up Christy, you’re looking good enough to eat.
CHRISTY
I’m cool Davo, whatsup with you.

ESAU
Just keeping in shape, I will have to be to keep up with your fine ass.
Christy smiled.
ESAU
I know a nice, quiet intimate restaurant a short distance from here, join me for lunch?
CHRISTY
Why not, meet you in the lobby in twenty.
ESAU
Great!
As Esau watched her walk away he rubbed his penis. Esau and Christy had lunch at Dusty’s Restaurant in South Holland, Illinois. After lunch he drove her to her departmental rented apartment.

INT. RINGO’S OFFICE 10 JUNE 2008- MORNING

EVETTA
How’s it going?
CHRISTY
It’s going, we had lunch yesterday and he drove me home, he really thinks he’s ladies man, with his short ass.
RINGO
You’ve got to play him, I don’t know what kind of move he’s going to make on you, but I know he‘s going to make a move and I believe it will be today and if he drove you home he thinks he knows where you live and that’s where he’s going to make his move. Your apartment has been equipped with close-circuit cameras, concealed microphones and other high-tech surveillance equipment.

INT. FITNESS CENTER-MORNING
Christy saw Esau standing at the desk as she entered the center.
ESAU
Hi beautiful join me for a drink?
CHRISTY
No, haven’t got time.
ESAU
Ok, maybe later?
CHRISTY
(coldly)
Maybe.

Twenty minutes later Christy was walking back to the locker room when she was cornered by Esau.

ESAU
Ready for that drink now.

CHRISTY
No, I’ve got to meet my trainer.
Christy rushed off to the weight room and Esau followed. After a half hour work out Christy was leaving the weight room.
ESAU
Whatsup beautiful got time for that drink?

CHRISTY
No, I’m sorry, I’ve got to run.

Esau pinned Christy against the tread mill.


ESAU
Seems like you are always in a hurry, whatsup?
Christy squeezed past Esau and walked over to a young handsome man gave him a hug and a kiss.

YOUNG MAN
Hi babe ready to go?

Christy turned to Esau.
CHRISTY
This is Mark my fiancé.
The man merely nodded as he and Christy walked out. Esau stood in the room still smelling Christy perfume and how good she felt as she squeezed past and he knew he had to have her. Esau followed Christy and the young man and watched while he dropped her off at home and drove away.

EXT. CHRISTY’S APARTMENT
Esau noticed there was a patio door on the rear porch and there were large trees in the small backyard. Esau smoked some crack, downed a couple pills and had a terrific hard-on, today was the day. Esau went to the alley behind Christy’s house, entered the backyard and crawled to the patio doors that he easily popped the lock on the doors and entered. A CNN news program was on the television and the volume was very loud, he also heard water running in the shower. He popped another pill and quietly made his way to the bathroom and saw a silhouette through the shower curtains. Esau half dazed from the drugs snatched back the shower curtain and saw John Ringo’s Glock pointed at his head.
RINGO
Run asshole so I can pop a cap in your ass.
Suddenly the room was filled with uniformed police. Esau was handcuffed and transported to the Special Crimes Bureau.


INT. SPECIAL CRIMES BUREAU-AFTERNOON.
Ringo, Evetta Christy and Monique observed Esau as he sat with his public defender seemingly unconcerned in the interrogation room and appeared to be looking directly at them and smirking, as they stood behind the one-way mirror.

RINGO
(looking at Monique)
Why do you think he agreed to talk to us?
MONIQUE
Based on his psyche report he has a near genius IQ and he really believes that he’s smarter than anyone else, he needs to talk, to show you how much smarter than you he is. Surprisingly, some serial killers want people to know why they committed those horrendous crimes, they want to show how inadequate the police are, my advice, work with him, thanks him for his willingness to cooperate, but remember he is a psychopath and is highly intelligent and will probably try to play mind games with you. He’s another Ted Bundy or that character in “Silence of the Lambs,” trusts your instincts, you’re the best homicide detective in this city, you’ll know what to do.


INT. INTERROGATON ROOM
Esau’s dark almost hypnotic eyes tracked Ringo as he entered the room and sat facing him; he was shackled to an iron wall ring public defender a young black man who looked right out of law school sat next to him. Ringo noticed how handsome he was. Ringo knew that an interrogation is like a game of chess and I had to have a plan and for every move he made and have a counter move. He knew I had to establish an immediate rapport with this beast and had to convince him he was sincere. Ringo turned on the tape recorder and dictated the specifics, date, time, place and persons present.

RINGO
You agreed to talk with us…me, why?

ESAU
(looking smug and arrogant)
Why not, I haven’t done anything wrong.

RINGO
I want you to know how much we- I- appreciate your agreeing to talk with us. Hopefully, we can help each other.

ESAU
I want to help if I can, I haven’t done anything wrong.

Ringo slid an official notification of rights form to the public defender that read it and slid it to his client, who signed it without reading and slid it back to me,

RINGO
You don’t consider breaking and entering and killing innocent young women wrong?

ESAU
Depends on your perspective, detective, but I didn’t kill anyone.
The young PD interrupted.
PD
Make sure detective you mention my clients cooperation to the State’s Attorney and we expect the courts to show some consideration for his cooperation.

Ringo didn’t answer and continued looking at Esau. He hated this man and he wished that he wasn’t handcuffed to the wall and tried something, to try to escape, to give him a reason to kill him to save the state the expense of a trial.

RINGO
In your signed confession, sir you admitted to killing three of the victims and that raised several questions.

ESAU
(smirking)
I was beaten by your fascist police officers into making that statement.
RINGO
What about the other women you killed?
ESAU
What other women?

RINGO
The young girl in Gary, Mary Jones and the prostitute, don’t you think the families of these women need closure? Why, what was your motive?”

Esau’s thin, colorless lips formed a smile.

Esau
I don’t have a motive, because I didn’t kill anyone, but I will tell you this, women, all women are evil, they all need to be released from their sins and I’m glad someone helped them by killing their black asses.

RINGO
Why were they evil?

ESAU
Women tempt men with their filthy bodies, walking around half nude all the time, I see it all the time, gyrating at that fitness center with their asses hanging out, they are the personification of evil!

RINGO
Are you a religious man, Mr. Sneed?
ESAU
Fuck naw, I don’t believe in that bullshit.

RINGO
What about Reverend Wilson why did you kill him and that other innocent drunk in the church? But you fucked up there was a witness in the church that saw everything and her testimony in court is going to get you the needle.