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(edited chapter 1, and added chapter 2.)This is my version of beauty and the beast, i think i'm going to try a few versions to see how they are, any advice you can give for improving it will really help:) Summary: Belle and her friend Aeriana go into the woods behind her house. They don't get too far before they find a castle that Belle definitely knows wasn't there before. Or was it? Belle gets a telepathic message from whatever's in there, to get as far away as possible, but when Aeriana
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(edited chapter 1, and added chapter 2.)This is my version of beauty and the beast, i think i'm going to try a few versions to see how they are, any advice you can give for improving it will really help:) Summary: Belle and her friend Aeriana go into the woods behind her house. They don't get too far before they find a castle that Belle definitely knows wasn't there before. Or was it? Belle gets a telepathic message from whatever's in there, to get as far away as possible, but when Aeriana