Gabriel was deemed unworthy by his own mother. How can he hope to find and accept his lifemate when he still feels imperfect.
A simple reminder that we all have day to day challenges we must overcome on this journey we call Life. May the knowledge that we are all together on this path bring peace to those who feel alone.
This is Example Before, after it has been edited professionally. Note the flow, tension, and shorter word count. Grammar, sentence structure and comma use are now correct.
Tonight is the night of the Blue Moon. The Blue Moon only comes every 4 years and it last a week. All the weres in the world will come together tonight and participate in games and challenges. To see who is the best and to try to find your mate. Will Kelly find her mate this year or will she have to wait and try to find her mate?
Libby Angel has the perfect life. Perfect parent's, perfect grades, and the perfect place on the dance team, captain. But, she doesn't want that. She doesn't want her life already planned out for her by her parent's. She wants to be free to make mistakes, or not get an a on a test. But her parent's would never approve. She's never drank, or partied, but they still aren't satisfied. What happens when she meets Ryan Castello, and ex gang member, who twists her life upside down? What about when
a modern day fairy tale from India, where arranged marriages are common.
Jebles wants money.....
Gabriel was deemed unworthy by his own mother. How can he hope to find and accept his lifemate when he still feels imperfect.
A simple reminder that we all have day to day challenges we must overcome on this journey we call Life. May the knowledge that we are all together on this path bring peace to those who feel alone.
This is Example Before, after it has been edited professionally. Note the flow, tension, and shorter word count. Grammar, sentence structure and comma use are now correct.
Tonight is the night of the Blue Moon. The Blue Moon only comes every 4 years and it last a week. All the weres in the world will come together tonight and participate in games and challenges. To see who is the best and to try to find your mate. Will Kelly find her mate this year or will she have to wait and try to find her mate?
Libby Angel has the perfect life. Perfect parent's, perfect grades, and the perfect place on the dance team, captain. But, she doesn't want that. She doesn't want her life already planned out for her by her parent's. She wants to be free to make mistakes, or not get an a on a test. But her parent's would never approve. She's never drank, or partied, but they still aren't satisfied. What happens when she meets Ryan Castello, and ex gang member, who twists her life upside down? What about when
a modern day fairy tale from India, where arranged marriages are common.
Jebles wants money.....